Here’s an excerpt from one of my favorite emails today:
There’s a mail drop box outside my office; X, I’ll leave an envelope for you there that Y can grab, and he can leave your doc for me there as well. It’s 75-39Y (the maze). He should put it inside a sealed envelope just to be safe…
This is between the three of us who together make a writers group. October 1 is our first big deadline. First half of our current projects, delivered in hard copy.
I like how her email makes it sound like a covert operation. In that spirit, I changed the names to be on an axis and the office number to keep our drop safe.
Also, nice use of the semicolon, C.